It's pronounced "Van GOCH"; didn't you see "Manhattan"? (Also see www.vggallery.com/misc/pronunciation.htm) I think this calls for a rewrite with an entirely new rhyme scheme.
A rhyme scheming stickler, I seeA critic that bickers is heWith license poetic I find him patheticFor never a nitpicker be
What rhymes with Van Goch?As pastor he tried leading flockthen donned a beret and a smockHis sanity veeredan earlobe he shearedand shot himself down with a Glock
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