Monday, November 23, 2009

Noir City, Part 1



You've entered the city called Noir
You stumbled and fell, here you are
It's midnight and scary
and though you are wary
you'll leave in the trunk of a car


This is
Noir City, part 1 of 5.

4 comments:

  1. This last line is typed in black tar

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  2. Hi Hilary,

    Can I borrow this limerick, in slightly altered form, for my NOIR CITY film festival this month?

    Done live, I think it's even more noir if the speaker moves from helpful to heinous in a single line:

    Welcome to the city of Noir
    You stumbled and fell, here you are
    Though its midnight and scary
    There's no need to be wary
    You'll be safe in the trunk of this car

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  3. Hey Eddie,

    Please use the limerick anytime you'd like. I'd be honored. All I ask is that you sign your book for me at the next Noir City Chicago--I bought my copy last year after you'd left town.

    And welcome to our humble blog
    of which I am only a cog
    Recite our rhymes noir
    wherever you are
    in Joseph H. Lewis-styled fog

    Though a fog machine might interfere with the screening...

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  4. Thanks!

    I'll gladly sign your book and buy you a drink at that bar down the street from the Music Box.

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