While it be brave to stretch the form and try something new…it might also be foolish.Oh Backthrow, this might be the worst To blow at two forms is a first This sucks as haikuAnd limerick, tooBoth gasket and spleen you have burst!
Your critique, well thanks much for sharing'Tis the price paid for acting so daringLooks like my dual-poemAin't much to write ho-omeInstead, should I sing like Fred Waring?
Not really, it wasn't that badBut missed, by a tad, being "rad"I was being a jerkKeep up the good workAnd I'll just keep being a cad
There's no place like home, do not strayThe rules can't be broke, they all sayThe line must be towedThe row must be hoedTo elsewhere, attention, don't pay
Not to worry, my bags aren't yet packedT'was a noble attempt, but it lackedBoth as haiku and limIt was sans "oomph" and "vim"The forms' cards all against me were stacked
And speaking of stacked, check that, JackThat must put a strain on her backThat gal sure can carryI think I will marryThe girl holding up the wine rack
I'd love to be walking a breastAnd kilt when to die for was dressedThis makes little senseNot even ha'penceBut I took a stab like a guest
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